Hey, thanks in advance for the upcoming summary of the story. It’s nice to see at least where it would have gone. On minor character roles, who would have been Bratty and Catty, Gearson, and the Temmies?

underpuffau:

Bratty and Catty were gonna be Pitch and Nago, and Gerson would be Coo. They actually have some backstory relevance so I’ll hold off on details for now.

Temmies were Batamon

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The joke was gonna be that they were Non-Puffs that got left up on the surface by mistake and were just thrown into the caves. But they freaked everyone out so they just got sent to their own little sector in Old Tower. I wanted to have them have a sort of creepy, unsettling vibe to them in contrast to the goofiness of the Temmies.